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Virgo-AriesArtist | In the midst of falling I reach my ground And it's such a place to be A lovely cradling cavern where I find just what I need It takes just but a minute where I flip the mental page A time to seek sense such sparkling truth, and it chases out the rage I claim this earth as a refuge sent with faith yet unbetrayed the darkness holds no power here for with Him, I am unafraid |
Ami Anne | ((((Virgo Aries Artist)))) ------------------ Jesus never put his trust in man cuz he knew what was in man. He who controls his Spirit is greater than he who controls a city Proverbs |
Randall | ------------------ "Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark |
Mystic Melody | That was excellent. |
Randall | I like the short poems that yet feel complete. ------------------ "Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark |
PlutoSquared | I like this. It's genuine. I like that Him can mean God or your partner? |
Randall | I took the capital "H" to be God. But a poem can be anything the author wants it to be. ------------------ "Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark |
Virgo-AriesArtist | Thanks for all the lovely comments, fellow Knowflakes PlutoSquared, you are free as the reader to see "Him" however it makes the most sense for you, though my intention was referencing the Creator/God/Divine Spirit |